Tuesday, April 8, 2014
Introductory paragraph
Isabel Allende once said " Heart is what drives us and determinate our fate". This quote is saying we can do whatever we want, we can direct our fate in the direction we wanna go. This right because fate is malleable. We can determinate the outcome of our life's. This can be seen in THE BOY WHO SAVED BASEBALL. Tom the main character faces many challenges. Tom has to face Friends, Family and baseball. Toms fate was going to be no more baseball, he changed that. He fraught for field. Toms family helped him with these difficult stages. His friends, they played baseball.
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You have a good beginning.Some of your sentences are not clear, like "He fraught for field." Your sentence do follow the structure.
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